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(phone ringing)

Man: (muffled tone) …hello?

Woman: Hey!

Man: …hey?

Woman: …

Man: (takes a breath) Do you know what time it is?

Woman: Sorry, didn't know who else to call.

Man: Well?

Woman: Well what?

Man: What do you need?

Woman: N-n-nothing, just wanted to talk.

Man: (sighs) Are you drunk?

Woman: For once, no. (nervous chuckle)

Man: Then?

Woman: I dunno.

(Horn honk is heard)

Man: What was that? Where are you?

Woman: Top of the world.

Man: Eh?

Woman: I can see everything from up here.

Man: Sure you're ok?

Woman: Never better.

Man: Then go back to bed. Some of us work.

Woman: Yeah, maybe.

Man: Good night.

Woman: More like goodbye.

Man: What?

Woman: I'm going.

Man: Where?

Woman: Not too sure…

Man: To bed, maybe?

Woman: No…out there. I just have to take a step.

Man: A step? No, you're not…?

Woman: Yep.

Man: …Sara!

Woman: Bye, Derek…

(sounds of air rushing, car horns, traffic…then nothing)

Man: (breathes heavy)

(busy signal)
:iconmegumitierana:
65 Horror

Oh my, I wonder could have happened?

Inspired by "4 am" by Luna Sea.
First few seconds of it had a cell ringing
and inspiration just took over from there.
...been meaning to check the translation of that song...

...but is it me or do I seem to doom my characters?
buuuuuut...who's to say what she really did :ohnoes:
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Mood: Optimism ~deshpandechirag May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I will never want to be that person who was being called. :(

Posting the comment on original post now, as I know now. Congrats to you for writing such a nice post. :)

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Piece!

- Chirag
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:iconmegumitierana:
~MegumiTierana May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :hug:
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:iconhemalshah:
Just came to know that your this post was plagiarized. Since I appreciated the accused, I wish to pass on my comments to the original author.

It was a coward thought and effort to do a suicide. But the way you have put in, it is really beautiful. I could live the conversation and feel it.
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:iconmegumitierana:
~MegumiTierana May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. It's bittersweet seeing all those comments he has and I just want to scream and shout, that's mine!

But I never said what happened at the end :)
So, its really left to you what she did.
Plus, I have this in my "may expand, write more" pile :)
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~VickaTheDragonHunter Jun 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
well written and very realistic
good job
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:iconmegumitierana:
~MegumiTierana Jun 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
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:iconvickathedragonhunter:
~VickaTheDragonHunter Jun 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem the truth has to be said
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:iconbrokenwordsandways:
that is just awesome
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~MegumiTierana Dec 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :3
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