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There’s this cat in my neighborhood. He likes to sit in flowerbeds and watches the world go by, no care at all in his eyes. I’m not a cat person. I much prefer dogs. They are far more affectionate and protective than a cat. My sister is allergic to dogs, so we can never have one. Every time I see that cat, I want to give him a good spray with the hose or a punt.
One day after school I find that cat sleeping in my mom’s rose bushes. No idea how anyone, let alone a cat, can get comfortable within a thorny bush. I squat down near the bush and stare at it. It’s eyes lazily open, and just glance at me saying, “Sleeping, go away.”
“Hey cat,” I say. “That’s not your bed. Get going.”
He just turns around, swats his tail a few times, and goes back to sleep.
I shake my head. “If you’re still here in five minutes, I’m getting the hose.” Sure enough, he is gone when I check again.
That weekend I have to baby-sit the neighbor’s toddler, Henry. He is a buddle of energy. It’s a rather nice day out for once. So instead of staring at Barney or colorful bubble things, I watch him play in the front yard. It’s a good thing my mom keeps old things around like my tricycle and ball set.
He rolls the balls around on the grass, the colorful orbs keep his interest for some time. Eventually, he crawls over to the tricycle, making baby noises. I help him up onto it. It’s funny; his feet barely reach the pedals.
Something large and fuzzy catches my eye. That cat decides to join us. I chuck at him, “What you want, cat?” He yawns, stretching itself on the grass. Henry burbles, pointing at the cat.
A ring comes from within the house. Against my better judgment, I leave Henry to answer it. It’s quiet and still inside the house, except for the phone. I pick up the receiver.
“Hello?”
“Hello…your warranty on your vehicle…”
I hang up and go back outside. Stupid machines, they always call you at a bad time. Like we even own a car. I guess it’s about time I feed Henry.
I look towards the yard I called out to him as I search everywhere. I check the backyard, I checked back inside the house, I looked in the front yard again and there was still no sign of him. The tricycle is nowhere to be seen either. Panic begins to sink in, as thoughts of what could have happened and the amount of trouble I would be in. I was only gone for a few seconds, he couldn’t have gotten far.
A shrill screech of brakes breaks into my concentration. My head immediately spins toward the road. I see Jerry’s ’69 Cutlass. He scrambles out of the car, hands on his head, yelling, “I didn’t see him! I swear, I didn’t see him!”
The worst plays in my head, stuck on repeat. All I can see is little Henry pedaling towards the street. All I can see is Jerry’s red classic car. All I can see was…
The neighbor’s begin to gather. I’m mortified. This is my fault. Why did I leave him there? Why did I answer the phone? How could I be so careless? Something pulls on my shirt, gurgling my name. I can’t stop staring at the scene. Another tug comes at my shirt. Reluctantly, I glance down. It’s Henry, smiling and pointing.
Never in all my life have I been so happy to see a toddler. I hug him and he burps, laughing at his own sound. If Henry is here, what did Jerry hit?
I pick up Henry and carry him in my arms. I cover his eyes as I draw close to the scene. My eyes are playing tricks on me. They had to be. There is no way I can be seeing this.
It’s the cat, with the tricycle.
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23 - Cat

I wanted to be a rebel and change the theme to dog...But I didn't. =p
Like everything else, it feels a tad incomplete o.O
*coughendingcough* Oh shush!!

Enjoy :3
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Mood: Sadness ~Rae-Simmons-of-DOOM Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor kitty. You should see Ugly. You might feeling differently about killing kitties. Even if they are fictional.
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~MegumiTierana Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it was either the kitty or the kid :(
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~Rae-Simmons-of-DOOM Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
<.< >.>

I know which one I would have picked...
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~MegumiTierana Aug 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
well the ending is terrible, namely because I didn't really get into detail about the cat...

:skullbones:-warning author trying to explain herself- :skullbones:

but its supposed to make it sound like the cat sacrificed himself for the kid
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~Rae-Simmons-of-DOOM Aug 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I got a little of that, but it was kinda like trying to taste zucchini in a strong hummus. Not the first thing that comes to mind. See what I did there? Yep, an obscure and useless simile. Even more dangerous than trying to explain yourself cause... well, you know...
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~MegumiTierana Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
o.o no I don't
lol

but its ok,
its only a first draft anyway :p
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~Rae-Simmons-of-DOOM Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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